new song

hi

i've made some changes from the old song. totally changed the verses please check it out and tell me if its better?

thanks :) enjoy!!

link-> http://www.mediafire.com/?kiy3mwj0qzd

(btw this should open with itunes :)

this is another version: which should open without itunes: ->

http://www.zshare.net/audio/716234600a562180/