Hi!
its been ages since i last updated! but oh wells :) i need your opinion on this new song im writing for a music assignment here's the first 2 verses and a chorus :D its not that good. but constructive comments would be really helpful? thanks heaps!
p.s there are two links for each music file.. just in case one doesn't work try the other :D
link to music assignment (sometimes i let love take over us)
http://www.mediafire.com/file/nhvwywwmltt/Memo (3).mp3
LYRICS!
SOMETIMES I LET LOVE TAKE OVER US
we're holding hands walking
through the park
yours and mine
entertwined
as we said
goodbye
we see the sun shining
in the sky
bringing light to the world
as it sees fit
mmmhmmm
and i look to you
and you look at me
and i wonder
because sometimes i love
what you are
but sometimes i don't know
if you could call this love
and sometimes i wonder
what we are
but sometimes i let love
take over us
i let love take over us
mmmhmm
:D thanks :) review!!
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